martes, 22 de enero de 2013

This is all about MAKING MOVIES... please write down your draft script here.

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  1. This is the story of for unknow firends. They are alone because they only have one objetive. They think the friends are obstacles. But that going to change. One unknow person send a letter to all of their.

    He is Stuart. He think the studios is the most important in the life. Think the friends are a distraction. But his letter come.

    He is Bolt. He think the most important is the competition and won trophys for his parents. Think the friends are useless for a alone sport. But his letter come.

    He is Jhonson. He think the most important is the family, the most near person are their. But his letter come.

    He is Gowi. He think the most important is the paint. He use to inspiration his animals. And think dont need friends. But his letter come.

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  2. The Script
    1º The main idea

    Sarah is a girl who is ill-treated by her mates. Everything changes when there comes Sophia that solves everything.

    2º The summary

    In a class, Sarah is afraid of the class exchange, because all her mates threaten her.
    In class of maths and suddenly the director came with a new mate , she is called Sophia. The teacher said that she should sit down and sat down next to Sarah. Sophia looks at her new mate and they become friends.
    In the change of class, Sophia saw that her mates were ill-treating Sarah.
    The teacher came, and Sophia asked Sarah because she wasn't saying anything to her mates and she said that she was afraid of her mates.
    When the class finish, Sophia and Sarah were to speak with the headmaster.

    The director speak with their mates and they changed and said sorry to Sarah.

    Characters

    Sara: student is ill-treated by peers and is very shy.

    Sofia: new student defender Sara and very responsible.

    Students: stalkers and courts Sara, the end became friends Sara and Sofia.

    Director: solves the problem with the word and reason.

    The scenes

    In the 1st act Sara sitting at the end of the class almost trembling from fear (the camera focuses on her and her gestures).

    In the 2nd act appear (the camera focuses on the entire class) the class talking very low and looking at Sara.

    In the 3rd act (focus the door) and suddenly opens and the director appears with a girl.

    In the 4th act (focus to the new girl and then to place beside Sara) the director presented the girl, named Sophia (Free site focuses beside Sara) the manager told him to sit down. Sophia looked at Sara (camera focusing faces 2).

    In the 5th act class switching (camera focuses all getting up and walking away teacher) all picked on Sara (camera focuses all surrounding Sara) and Sofia could not believe it (focus face of Sofia).


    The next teacher on the 6th act (focus students sitting down) after (Sara's face) and later talking to Sara Sofia.


    In the 7th act the bell rings (looks at Sara and Sofia in the director's office talking to him).

    In the 8th act the director talking with fellow Sara (the camera focuses on the entire class).

    In the 9th act peers ask forgiveness for Sara (camera focuses the entire class).


    It is a silent short film

    Inmaculada Rodríguez, Victoria Campos, Bárbara Gómez.

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  3. SCRIPT

    Andrea came and saw Carmen. Carmen was rare.

    Andrea: Hi! What's wrong?
    Carmen: I saw a stray dog and I felt very sad.

    Andrea is shocked.

    Andrea: Really? Every time there are more abandoned animals. People prefer to buy pet rather than adopting peta. However there are people who abandon their pets.

    Carmen gets upset.

    Carmen: Then we should do something, there are also people that earn money on exploting the female to have babies.
    Andrea: I think that instead of buy animals, we should adopt or giving pets that we see unowned.

    Carmen feel excited.

    Carmen: I think that it is a great idea, buy isn't enough if we do it alone. We also need the help more people.

    Elena arrives.

    Elena: Hi girls!

    Andrea and Carmen tell her what happened Elena.

    Elena: I think that we should report the people who abuse animals.
    Andrea: It seems a good idea!

    Toward evening

    Carmen: I have to go
    Elena: Bye, bye!
    Andrea: See you soon.

    They are leave and the curtain closes.

    Elena Granadilla Romero, Andrea Casero Hernández y Mª Carmen Sevilla Ballesteros.

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  4. REPORT HIM (By Paula López Galindo, Cristina Adán Flores, Nerea Aguilar Pérez and Nuria Fernández Sánchez)
    [Part 1]
    Descriptions :
    Paula: She is a young girl and in love that suffers gender violence and she doesn't realise. Physic like the reality. Physchological character: Hard character and blind in the direction that she doesn't realise that her boyfriend mistreat him.
    Cristina: Best friend of Paula, she knows nothing that she friend suffers mistreatment. Physic like the reality: Physchological character: Cheerful and extroverted.
    Nuria: Doctor and nurse of hospital. Physic like the reality. Physchological character: Shy, intelligent and good person.
    Nerea: Lawyer and Nuria's best friend. Physic like the reality. Physchological character: Funny and enjoyable but serious in her job.

    Summary:
    Paula, the protagonist, is a girl strong that suffer mistreatment for her boyfriend, but nobody
    knows and she neither.
    Her best friend, Cristina, doesn't see Paula from a few days ago and she is enough uneasy. Cristina goes to Paula's house. She after rang the door and doesn't has answer, she opennes with her key. After open the door she discovers a horror surprise, when she sees Paula lying in the floor bleed, with bruises and wounds. Cristina catches Paula and they run to hospital.
    There a nurse served with her friend attorney. The nurse says that is necessary make to Paula a transfusion of blood because, Paula loses too many blood. Cristina wants bestow her blood to Paula, Nuria the nurse, makes a check for see if their blood are compatible. Their blood are compatible and discover that they have the same genetics, and this bestow says that they are sister.
    Paula after a few days recovering and Cristina says Paula the announcement.
    The next day, with Paula be over it all, the four friends, Nerea, Nuria, Cristina y Paula, meet for take somethings, and report for mistreatment to Paula's boyfriend.
    The end, the boyfriend is convicts to five years the of prison.

    (Preface): (In the entrance hall of Paula's house)
    Paula and her boyfriend
    -Paula: (someone knocks on the door, she opens up and is her boyfriend. They have fired it from work and he is furious. I know that has been my fault, but please, do not beat me any more (He hits Paula in the face and to Paula leaves the mark) I know that all of this you do so that I learn but, please, stop now! (He hit in the eye to Paula and leave it purple)

    (Leaves the title while vases are heard breaking).


    (First scene): (In a park)
    Cristina
    (Cristina is looking at the whatsapp, in your mobile, and Paula has not answered their messages, since two days ago,) Paula respond please, two days ago that you am not answering and you have me worried. (Cristina goes to Paula's house, called three times the bell and wait a little time, and Paula does not answer) Good thing I have the keys. (Cris take out the keys and opens the door)

    (Second scene): (In the entrance hall of Paula's house)
    Paula and Cristina
    (Paula is lying on the floor, unconscious, with a blow to the head, bruising and blood) (When Cristina enters Paula's home, says helplessly her:) Paula... what happened you? It responds... Oh my God we have to go to the doctor!


    (Third scene): (In the entrance hall of the hospital)
    Nuria, Cristina, Paula and Nerea
    (Cristina arrives at the hospital with Paula, and crying to the medical assistance): Help! We need help, my friend is unconscious! 
    -Medical Nuria: (look at Paula from feet to head, she looks bad) Wait a minute am going to tell it to get a stretcher to take her to a room. 
    -Cristina: Okay, we wait. 
    -Medical Nuria: (brings a chair for Paula and a girl comes with she, the lawyer Nerea) there is no stretchers free, so we're going to sit donw her here (Points to the chair) and we'll take her to the room. 
    -Cristina: This well.

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    Respuestas
    1. REPORT HIM (By Paula López Galindo, Cristina Adán Flores, Nerea Aguilar Pérez and Nuria Fernández Sánchez)
      [Part 2]
      (Fourth scene): (In a room of the hospital)
      Cristina, Nerea, Nuria and Paula
      (The four girl come to room)
      -Nurse: (Nuria see Paula's wound from her temple that doesn't stop bleeding) How many does this wound bleeding?
      -Cristina: when I found, half an hour ago, was like this.
      -Nurse: Ok, She is lose too many blood, need a transfusion of blood urgent.
      -Cristina: And, What do we now?
      -Nurse: Well, we need someone that wants bestow blood, because fate this is a big problem.
      -Cristina: Ok, I do.
      -Nurse: Do meet you...?
      -Cristina: Paula (says fast), and yes, I am her best friend.
      -Nurse: And your name is....
      -Cristina: Cristina.
      -Nurse: Well done, I will extract your blood.


      (Fifth scene): (In the same room of the hospital)
      Nuria, Cristina and Paula
      (The doctor makes a test to Paula to find out the type of blood and then to Cristina for what happens to have the same type, thanks to that test also realizes that the two have the same genetics, DNA , which means that they are sisters) 
      -Medical: All this is very rare. 
      -Cristina: What happens? Does our blood type is not the same? 
      -Medical: You have the same blood type but in addition is that you have the same genetic DNA. 
      -Cristina: Then it means that ... 
      -Medical: In effect, you are family, sisters. 
      -Cristina: i can't believe it!


      (Sixth scene): (In the same room of the hospital)
      Cristina and Paula
      (After a few minutes, the donation is done favorably and with the passage of time, Paula is improving, and Cristina is at all time next to her friend). Paula, who is knocked down in a stretcher, wakes up slowly. Cristina goes to his side).
      -Cristina: Are you better? (She asks with calm).
      -Paula: Yes, thank you for you all this time stays to my side to look after myself.
      -Cristina: It goes, does not have importance, but I have to tell you something.
      -Paula: What?
      -Cristina: Since you were losing blood, I offered voluntary to donate part of my blood and in addition the doctor who attended to you did to us to two a test and ... we are sisters!
      -Paula: Are you really??!
      -Cristina: Yes! Apparently she said that we had the same genetics, of the DNA, for what we are sisters.
      -Paula: I am very happy!
      -Cristina: I also sister!



      (Seventh scene): (In the tribunal)
      Nerea, Nuria, Paula and Cristina
      (Paula was recovering little by little, with help of his friends, but nevertheless there was not solved the conflict that had with his pair, who was the maltratador, agitator of his wounds. But nevertheless, the doctor Nuria, on having seen him the wounds when it came to the hospital realized that they were done by violence and were not normal, therefore it started investigating with his friend the pleaded Nerea, on the happened. Nerea, before this situation, decides to help the girls, and to put in touch with them)
      (Nerea stays with Nuria to speak on Paula's topic, since his physical condition does not owe to a simple fall).
      - Nuria: is it necessary that he says to you what is happening?
      -Nerea: it is not necessary.
      - Nuria: I think the same thing that you.
      -Nerea: I have been with some cases as this one, it does little.
      - Nuria: what debits to do?
      -Nerea: Speak with Cristina I will be going to speak with Paula.
      ( Nuria stays with Cristina to see if it knows something on the case, whereas Nerea is going to speak with Paula, which does not realize of what really happens to him).
      (Already it is quite clarified, Cristina tells his suspicions to Nuria and Paula tells the history to Nerea from a beginning, ultimately Nerea his friend speaks with a fiscal agent, the two speak and monitor the boyfriend of Paula a few days, and ultimately the tests assemble to put it in the jail)

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